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| 53.1 | Chapter 2 looks ok | DLO10::TARLING | | Wed May 08 1991 12:25 | 6 |
| Val, Kristin;
Chapter 2 looks OK!
Arnold.
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| 53.2 | The view from the UK | UKEDU::SHONE | Keith Shone @RKA 830-4074 | Fri May 10 1991 07:28 | 43 |
| Module: Issuing Commands
My views - not necessarily those of my colleagues.
Some of these comments I've made elsewhere - I think.
Page Comment
1-5 First two sentences seem verbose. How about:
"To request service from VMS we use an
interface called the Digital Command Language (DCL)."
1-6 Line 1: <Nit> english -> English
1-7 Line 3: typo "... in an written..." ->
"... in a written..."
Table heading: "...can Effect..." ->
"...can Affect..."
Body of table: Positional Qualifier:
After the word FILE2.TXT I assumed the word Example:
referred to another example of the positional qualifier
Sorry, just the impression from a first reading
1-11a Sub heading 2.: couple of typos:
managhers -> managers; environement -> environment
1-16 CTRL/T - works only when enabled
1-17 Something I queried before in the first sentence:
"...in response to many of the commands..."
VMS doesn't issue system messages to many commands.
The /LOG qualifier will force -I- or -S- serverity messages
to be emitted. Generally, few messages are issued
for ongoing valid commands.
Probably the text ought to say something like:
"When VMS, through DCL, is unable to understand your
commands, DCL will issue messages. These messages can
tell...".
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| 53.3 | view of holland | NWGEDU::WIERSMA | Drive a BENTLEY or walk... | Mon May 13 1991 17:45 | 30 |
| Review chapter:
ISSUING COMMANDS
Page 1-6: Figure 1-1
$PRINT FILE1.LIS /COPIES=2
Why not using this example to explain the bullets
Verb: $help ---> $print
Parameter: $print file1.txt ---> $print file1.lis
Qualifier: Mention the slash "/" You can recognize him from it
Qualifier value:
$print/copies=2 file1.txt --> $print file1.lis/copies=2
Page 1-7: Where is the parameter qualifier. Which I always call they special
qualfiers like there is: TYPE/PAGE
Page 1-12: typo third line: <REFERENCE>...
Page 1-16: CTRL/S and CTRL/Q (same as F1)
Page 1-17a: Mention since VMS V5.3 Sysatem Message online available
SYS$HELP:SYSMSGHELP.HLB
Doei Arjen.
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| 53.4 | Missing example UAF re 3 | NWGEDU::WIERSMA | Drive a BENTLEY or walk... | Tue May 14 1991 17:37 | 39 |
| Hello again,
Here is the promised template of the UAF record.
Username: SMITH Owner: Mary Smith
Account: ADMIN UIC: [123,456] ([ADMIN,SMITH])
CLI: DCL Tables: DCLTABLES
Default: DUA0:[SMITH]
LGICMD: SYS$MANAGER:ADMIN_LOGIN.COM
Flags:
Primary days: Mon Tue Wed Thu Fri
Secondary days: Sat Sun
Primary 000000000011111111112222 Secondary 000000000011111111112222
Day Hours 012345678901234567890123 Day Hours 012345678901234567890123
Network: ---------##########----- ---------##########-----
Batch: ##### Full access ###### ##### Full access ######
Local: --------###########----- --------###########-----
Dialup: ----- No access ------ ----- No access ------
Remote: --------###########----- --------###########-----
Expiration: (none) Pwdminimum: 6 Login Fails: 0
Pwdlifetime: 180 00:00 Pwdchange: (pre-expired)
Last Login: (none) (interactive), (none) (non-interactive)
Maxjobs: 0 Fillm: 100 Bytlm: 4096
Maxacctjobs: 0 Shrfillm: 0 Pbytlm: 0
Maxdetach: 0 BIOlm: 18 JTquota: 1024
Prclm: 2 DIOlm: 18 WSdef: 200
Prio: 4 ASTlm: 24 WSquo: 500
Queprio: 0 TQElm: 10 WSextent: 1000
CPU: (none) Enqlm: 30 Pgflquo: 10000
Authorized Privileges:
TMPMBX NETMBX
Default Privileges:
TMPMBX NETMBX
Hope this explain a little bit of what I meant.
Doei Arjen
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| 53.5 | details, details | MELKOR::HENSLEY | ratbag in training | Tue May 21 1991 17:01 | 4 |
| Minor nit: how about using a logical name for the device (since we
would normally recommend such).
ih
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| 53.6 | mention F1/hold button | TEACH::CHUCK | | Sat Jun 01 1991 01:36 | 5 |
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module 2: Page 1-16 I know his is for ctrl keys
but the connection between ^S and ^Q
with the hold (f1) button should be
made here.
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| 53.7 | More comments from DC | TEACH::RINE | | Wed Jun 05 1991 14:50 | 13 |
| The following are comments on Module 2 Issuing Commands
Page 1-5. "Common words" could be replaced with "English-like"
Page 1-6. Something should be said somewhere on this page to indicate that
this is a "Command Line" the command is Print.
Page 1-8. The first 2 paragraphs on this page pare Perfect, I couldn't
think of a better way to put it.
Page 1-9. The first 2 bullets on this page are repeated from page 1-9
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| 53.8 | Another California crankiness from tom | SWAM1::STERN_TO | Have TK; Will Travel | Tue Oct 29 1991 15:51 | 5 |
| Why is there a copy of the sysuaf record in a user-related chapter? In
the pilot class that's going on this week, this caused students to
start asking questions that are not going to be answered for at least
two more days (longer if we keep getting bogged down in the amount of
material in the next few chapters).
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