| T.R | Title | User | Personal
Name | Date | Lines |
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| 13.1 | Draft ready for review | SUPER::ROUNDS | Kristin Rounds, DTN 381-1066 | Fri Dec 07 1990 12:03 | 3 |
| A draft of this module is available for review in:
SUPER::ES$REVIEW:[RA0293]RA0293_CHAP_6_PROFILE.PS
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| 13.2 | Reading, UK - first pass | UKEDU::SHONE | Keith Shone @RKA 830-4074 | Thu Dec 13 1990 10:24 | 25 |
| I found the flow of this chapter OK.
My nits, typos and other observations are below.
NOTE: These are my feelings etc. not of the UK as a whole.
I comment on typos etc on instructor pages as well as customer pages.
Instructors deserve to have unambiguous, correctly spelled and
technically accurate information too! :-)
Page Observation
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1-8 There is an extra "MAIL" heading at the right hand side
of the display. There should be just one, one line above
the other headings.
1-20 Example 1-7 is out of place
1-21 Typo Bullet 3: specififed -> specified
1-22 Bullet 1: "All mail messages are subdivided into folders"
Since when? I suggest this bullet isn't needed. (Or
do I get one in the back :-} )
1-30a Heading doesn't make sense.
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| 13.3 | New version available | SUPER::ROUNDS | Kristin Rounds, DTN 381-1066 | Tue Apr 30 1991 07:52 | 4 |
| The REQUEST command has been removed from this chapter, and some of the
larger examples have been broken into smaller ones.
SUPER::ES$REVIEW:[RA0293]RA0293_CHAP_7_COMMUN.PS
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| 13.4 | A few nits only! | DUCK::SHONEK | Keith Shone UK Edu 830-4074 | Thu May 02 1991 08:05 | 26 |
| Only minor comments on this revision.
Page 1-3:
Objectives: first bullet could omit the word your - the rest of the
objectives are impersonal.
Page 1-4:
First topic - similar remark to page 1-3
Page 1-10:
The heading line is rather more indented in this example than it is in
reality - who'll notice?
Page 1-27a:
It's appropriate on this page to warn users of printing mail messages
that could be queued to public printers. The contents of mail messages
may not always be fit for general public consumption!
Page 1-34:
Bullet 5: reorder this so it resembles the other bullets:
o Use folders to organize your mail messages into folders
There, that didn't hurt did it?
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| 13.5 | Response to 13.4 | HARDY::ROUNDS | Kristin Rounds, DTN 381-1066 | Thu May 02 1991 18:30 | 3 |
| I've incorporated your corrections and suggestions. Thanks, Keith.
Kristin
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