| I found the flow of this chapter OK.
My nits, typos and other observations are below.
NOTE: These are my feelings etc. not of the UK as a whole.
I comment on typos etc on instructor pages as well as customer pages.
Instructors deserve to have unambiguous, correctly spelled and
technically accurate information too! :-)
Page Observation
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1-6a Line 3: Typo: names -> name
1-11 Line 1: command,shown -> command, shown
1-12 Line 1: having SHOW LOGICAL/PROCESS at the start of this
line doesn't help the rest of the sentence make sense.
1-17a Bullet 1: sub-bullet 3: name as the -> name has the
1-19 Callout 2 in Notes: Create s second -> Create a second
1-21a Last line: extraneous ##
1-21 First line: Typos: rewritten looks like this:
Example 1-4, shows an example of the use of the CONCEALED
attribute
1-26 All SYS$ names should be uppercase
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