| I found the flow of this chapter OK.
My nits, typos and other observations are below.
NOTE: These are my feelings etc. not of the UK as a whole.
I comment on typos etc on instructor pages as well as customer pages.
Instructors deserve to have unambiguous, correctly spelled and
technically accurate information too! :-)
Page Observation
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1-4 Bullet 1, sub-bullet 3: Typo: occurance -> occurrence
1-10 Bullet 1: Typo vms -> VMS
Bullet 3: Typo 13:53:30.39 -> 13:53:30.89
1-16 First table entry: Typo COMMENT_DELIMITER -> /COMMENT_DELIMITER
1-20 Top line of table: Typo UIS -> UIC
1-23 Callout 2: extraneous "##"
1-28 Bottom line: extraneous "##"
1-30 Bullet 1: Typo: Proccess -> Process
Bullet 3: Typo: Commone -> Common
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