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9.1 | Draft ready for review | SUPER::ROUNDS | Kristin Rounds, DTN 381-1066 | Fri Dec 07 1990 11:59 | 3 |
| A draft of this module is available for review in:
SUPER::ES$REVIEW:[RA0293]RA0293_CHAP_5_PROFILE.PS
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9.2 | Reading, UK - first pass | UKEDU::SHONE | Keith Shone @RKA 830-4074 | Thu Dec 13 1990 10:19 | 31 |
| I found the flow of this chapter OK.
My nits, typos and other observations are below.
NOTE: These are my feelings etc. not of the UK as a whole.
I comment on typos etc on instructor pages as well as customer pages.
Instructors deserve to have unambiguous, correctly spelled and
technically accurate information too! :-)
I felt this chapter needed some basic definitions. I pondered over
suggesting a keyboard diagram for classroom discussions.
Could a reasonably generic keyboard (VT200 series?) diagram be added
as an appendix? Presumably under modularity these things are available
anyway, to be added as desired ;-)
Some basic details like size of screen, what a cursor does and what an
audible alarm is for?
Page Observation
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1-10 Replace "Represses ..." with a cleaner description
e.g. Stops the data flow to screen or paper. Output
is routed to an electronic waste bin.
1-11a VAXnotes - I'm seeing it spelled like this lately.
Is this its new name or should it still be VAX Notes?
1-15 Callout 6 - the key box should contain KP7 not PF7
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9.3 | Chapter removed from course | SUPER::ROUNDS | Kristin Rounds, DTN 381-1066 | Tue Apr 30 1991 07:42 | 9 |
| Because the course was too long for three days, this chapter has been
removed.
- SET/SHOW TERMINAL material has been moved to "Issuing Commands"
- DEFINE/KEY has been moved to "Customizing Your Working Environment"
(new chapter 9)
- Set-Up is now in the Operator course
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